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托福作文2._寫作錯誤.ppt

'托福作文2._寫作錯誤.ppt'
Academic Writing7類常見錯誤1. 省略Wealthy parents shouldn't spoil their children.Shouldn’t I’m Can’t He’s Shouldn’t → should not I’m → I am Can’t → cannotHe’s → he is / he has he was2. Informal languageToday, newspapers report lots of crimes in horrible details.lots of a host of a vast number of numerous a great deal of a great amount of 可數不可數 3. Spelling英美詞匯差異The impact of tourism on these traditional neighbourhoods must be analysed.The impact of tourism on these traditional neighborhoods must be analyzed. 英式 美式 se ze/ ce analyse analyze civilise civilize practise practice globalise globalizev. 英式 美式 our or colour color neighbour neighbor favourite favoriten. 英式 美式 長 短 storey story dialogue dialog archaeology archeology jewellry jewelry traveller traveler詞匯長短4. 詞匯沒有特色例句1Serious crimes harm people’s lives. → severe → offense / criminal act → damage / destroy undermine / jeopardize → individuals / man / mankindseriouscrimeharmpeople例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.be more than → outweigh例句3Our world is becoming more and more reliant on modern Technology.more and more → increasingly + adj on a rise5. 句子無銜接1. The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with this situation.分析句間關系 加銜接詞The environment is becoming worse ; therefore, we must work together to deal with this situation.2. Opinions from different people will help us finish our work better and faster, their opinions can serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem.2. Opinions from different people will help us finish our works better and faster, because their opinions can serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem. 6. 感情色彩過于強烈 love letter 式寫作So , we should make sure that globalization does not harm our own traditional culture!! 改。So不要和should 連用,感情強烈?!?therefore7. 宗教作為引言We must be friendly to others because the Bible says, “ treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.”引言: 名人名言/ 公認的觀點Bible 圣經:信仰,非邏輯推理
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